Hourglass Fiction - It's About Family 5/5 - Epilogue

[gin_akasarahsmom]

Taking the story down for a bit of rewriting... should be back soon.

Okay.. all spiffed up and ready to go.  Part one Reposted here:

akasarahsmom.livejournal.com/27589.html

Comments

[quiethearted.livejournal.com]

Just had a sec and peaked in. Can't wait to read this and see what's new, if anything. Glad to see it posted. You're a wonderful writer and there can never be too much when it comes from your pen. Have a happy holidays, Boo-grrl.

[akasarahsmom.livejournal.com]

Not a whole lot of changes... I don't think there's anything new. If I had the time, and didn't have so many other stories going I'd probably totally revamp it, but it was close to finished when I pulled it from the 'unfinished' files so this is basically a story I wrote 8 years ago. It's kinda the same style, my writing hasn't changed that much over the years, but it's a little....campier than I normally do since I was picturing the tv show as a sort of Xena-style thing instead of just writing a story...and now I'm rambling...

LOL... Happy Holidays to you as well.

[ravenbull.livejournal.com]

Short...but enjoyable. I enjoy your writing so much that anything less than 30 chapters is way too short! That said-I can see how much you have progressed as a writer since you penned this story. ;-)

[akasarahsmom.livejournal.com]

ROFL... wow... that's just about the nicest 'this sucked' I've ever read. ;) ROFL!!

I know it's not my best work... I did warn you ;)

I'm glad you enjoy my writing enough to plod through this. LOL

Thanks for the comment to! I was beginning to wonder if people were just going to read it and not say anything... I can tell it's being read because of the stats page on LJ... LOTS of people, but no comments. So that in itself lets me know how much it disappoints. Ah well, eight years ago I was a bit distracted... my daughter was 3 months old at the time. LOL

Thanks again! I really appreciate the comment. Truly. I've been smiling, and chuckling the entire time I've been typing this reply! :)